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©2003-2010 ~Coheed33
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not good at all. a joke, not serious, funny. serious, truthful, not a joke, very good. (you decide which one i mean)

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:icondarkfaerie33:
it's good to be happy.

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Call me a safe bet,
I'm betting I'm not.
:icontriskaidekaphobia:
teehee. Guess who. It flows very well, but the meter is a bit weak, is it in iambic pentameter, because you messed up in line three, it has 11 sylabubs, not 10, and it's a petrarchan sonnet, right? It doesn't look Shakespearean... Hey LOOK :idea: the mall!!!

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*It's something unpredictable, but in the end it's Right...* -Greenday

:sadangel: :floating:
Who are you? What are you? Why are you here?

*Peopliiyyy...* -Leeloo Dallas, Multipass!
:iconcoheed33:
i am sorry for the horrible poem. i will type a better one tonight. maybe. and where is a mall

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i had a dream and you were in it,
the blue of your eyes was infinite.
you seemed to be, in love with me,
which isn't very realistic.
:icontriskaidekaphobia:
a mall is.... I'm sorry, Alex. Instead I'll take 'Greek Mythology' for 300. where is a mall... Somewhere, I suppose... But maybe not... Perhaps it's all in your imagination. -see A Beautiful Mind for the full what-is-real-what-is-just-your-psychotic -visions deal-

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*It's something unpredictable, but in the end it's Right...* -Greenday

:sadangel: :floating:
Who are you? What are you? Why are you here?

*Peopliiyyy...* -Leeloo Dallas, Multipass!
:iconmokurai:
hehe

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Who needs hate when you have love?
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
Kayton = the best

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